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I am the One

By Max


I am the one that

Caught a ten inch bass.  My dad

Helped me reel it in.  I am the one

Who saw it, I am the one who told

Dad to stop reeling the fish up

To the dock.  I saw the line

Rubbing on the rusty dock.

I told dad to stop.

He did not.

I am the one that saw

The line break.