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Hot Day

By Kaylee


Hot day, hot day

Swimming in the pool.

On the diving board or

In the slide, ready to

Retrieve or dive, ready

To climb or jump,

hot day hot day

swimming in the pool.


Cold day, cold day inside

Still swimming in the pool, but inside

With my teacher or alone

Swimming in a lake or

A pool it doesn’t really matter.


Hot day or cold day

Still ready to swim

Passing through the whirl

Of color and wind after diving off

The diving board.  A lot of noise, then

Suddenly it is silent.

A perfect dive.  Even though

It is cold outside, still swimming in the pool.