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Cold Pool

By Habso

 

I went to my big nephew’s house

We would go in the pool that day.

I couldn’t wait.

I t would be fun.

We changed and we went in the pool.

Me and my little brother went in first.

It was ice old!

I swam there for my first time.

It was fun at their house

When I went out of the pool

Flies went on me.

So I was in the pool pretty much

The whole time.

We played sharks and fish.

We had a pump.  We filled it

with water and it

Was like a hose.